Monday, 11 June 2012

My Brother

When I was growing up, my role model was my older brother, his name is Alberto. Alberto is smart, he always cleared up everything that I ask him. When I couldn't work out my problem, he helped me out, and now he is still doing that. I remember my first day in the school he picked me up and I was crying. I said I want to give up and he told me don't worry today was your first day tomorrow will be better. I love my brother and nowaday I call him all time

2 comments:

  1. I want to have a brother like your brother.

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  2. Nice usage of phrasal verbs :) Siblings are awesome!

    Suggestions:

    "cleared up everything"

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